My OU (Beginner) Team

Everyone on smogon's used this team, use something that's actually worth rating before you ask for one. And word to the wise, I could probably take your whole team down with just a Magnezone, Honchkrow, and Machamp, lay off the pokemon what are weak to Fighting and Dark typed moves.

^^^someones a harsh bisquit meh by being very smogony, it's a decent team, but my main crituqe is that the bulk if not all of your team is raped by the ever so common hetran+scizor combanation. hetran beats ceiebi, ape, and scizor, and scizor takes out tyranitar, starmie, celebi, and umbreon. my advice would be to ditch the umbreon, who unessarily slows down this more offensive team, and get yourself a gyarados in it's stead. as he effectivle deals with and sets up on both scarf tran, and almost all scizor sets. apart from that maybe consider changing up celebi's set a little to possibley add earth power, this will allow you to much better dispose of steels. another crituque is that life orb starmie is not a good idea in most senarios, I would add hp fire or hp grass to that slot. over all I give it a 6/10, it needs some change, plus I just generally think umbreon is a bad poke competitively, but meh it's all right, you may want to keep it for wishing up some sweepish pokes such as the ttar. final remark is that if starmie dies, and ape definantly will, skarm is going to rape some face. sorry if I seem harsh. I just love me some pokemanz, welcome to the site! This elephant and I hope you stick around

Archer wrote:

First of all, I don't have to listen to you guys! Muhaha!

But, I will. Like I said, I just threw some crazy crap together and then posted. I haven't even used it yet anyway, or even started thinking about using it.

That's a no no. Try and use teams first, get experience with them then if you still don't know why your losing then you make a rmt.
I'll rate it inna bit. I'm tired :3

This is why i quit battling.